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 <description><![CDATA[不错的，flesh]]></description>
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 <author><![CDATA[翔]]></author>
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 <pubdate><![CDATA[Mon, 10 Sep 2001 15:05:14 +0000]]></pubdate>
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 <description><![CDATA[再提！]]></description>
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 <author><![CDATA[跋锋寒]]></author>
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 <author><![CDATA[跋锋寒]]></author>
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 <description><![CDATA[很感动.
感觉,语言,有些地方虽然不是很到位,但都是自我的,是能够打动人的.网络习气比较少.很干净.
上面是我总体的感受,还有,我认为,文章是靠情节构建的,而上文还没有出现真正意义上的情节,文章是
靠细节表现的,而上文的细节大多是泛指的,欠具体,传神.文笔也稍嫌嫩,不简洁.两个括号里的话,是否
可以考虑删去,那样会更干净. ..]]></description>
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 <author><![CDATA[aaa123]]></author>
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 <pubdate><![CDATA[Fri, 24 Aug 2001 12:11:00 +0000]]></pubdate>
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